Oh man, I love those saws
I dunno what's with the submissions today, but lots of them have that retro vintage saw wave chord sound, and honestly, I cannot get enough of it. So you've won my biased vote already for this song, haha :P
You had a very nice introduction, everything fit. I only have three complaints with this song (keep in mind that I love the song so it's pretty hard to find the complaints):
One, the piano was the FL Keys from FL! I suggest you go and find yourself a nice piano VST or something because honestly, those keys just sound far too cheesy. I enjoyed the song, but the keyboard took away a significant amount of feeling from it. At 41 seconds in, you instroduce this really high saw... REALLY high. It hurt my ears :( Just put it down an octave and I'm sure it'll be fine. Lastly, please, only use a guitar if you have a guitar player, or if you have some really kickass samples, man! FL Slayer sounds really bad.
The arrangement of the song is powerful and diverse, so it's something that I really enjoyed. You did a great job on the song, you just have a few things to work on on it, and then I'd listen to this song all the time :)
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Keep the tunes comin' man, and keep it easy!
Nice use of synths!
I really like the beggining especially. The middle part of the song needs more low end sounds or something to drive the beat more. Then keep the light easy beat at the end like you have at the beggning. Also i think the tinny/metal sounding synths[for like of a better description] needs to be lowered in volume or something.. its just a little to harsh for the rest of the song i think. Other than that it is a great piece! very light and happy. Just work on the metal sounding synths and pure more of a driving beat to it, especially in the center parts of the song.
Sincerely and with utmost respect,