Oh man, I love those saws
I dunno what's with the submissions today, but lots of them have that retro vintage saw wave chord sound, and honestly, I cannot get enough of it. So you've won my biased vote already for this song, haha :P
You had a very nice introduction, everything fit. I only have three complaints with this song (keep in mind that I love the song so it's pretty hard to find the complaints):
One, the piano was the FL Keys from FL! I suggest you go and find yourself a nice piano VST or something because honestly, those keys just sound far too cheesy. I enjoyed the song, but the keyboard took away a significant amount of feeling from it. At 41 seconds in, you instroduce this really high saw... REALLY high. It hurt my ears :( Just put it down an octave and I'm sure it'll be fine. Lastly, please, only use a guitar if you have a guitar player, or if you have some really kickass samples, man! FL Slayer sounds really bad.
The arrangement of the song is powerful and diverse, so it's something that I really enjoyed. You did a great job on the song, you just have a few things to work on on it, and then I'd listen to this song all the time :)
Could you do me a favor and check out my newest piece called "Emotions of a Crowbar"? I'd really appreciate it, and I'm sure you'd enjoy the track :) Check it out at:
Keep the tunes comin' man, and keep it easy!