Good, but..
Certain parts i liked a lot, but it seemed like you were trying to pack way too much stuff into one thing that didn't quite flow into eachother. Also the guitar sound is a little stale :P but you have something here. if refined could be awesome! ^_^ Like how it started for example, a little chaotic with overlaping things, but then it evened out. i liked that a lot. and when it got silent i was expecting an imidiate bang! like a takeoff point, but it didn't come. instead it sounded like it was the start of a different song. you know? I am just trying to help, i don't know if I'm making sense.