dont give up

u did ok for a first composition but i dont think it belongs in the metal section this should be in rock or something at most metal rock if u just have to say its metal.it wasnt repetative witch is a good thing and really the only other advice i can give is work on mixing more it sounds to garage recorded all in all it was just ok and a fair vote would be a low one but im going have way b/c of the effort.

sweet

for your first submission this is realy good keep it up man stay metal.