Sounds like you were doing a lot of downstrokes during the beginning.
It sounded really choppy, and I was expecting something much smoother.
The electric solo was very nice, that was a sweet ad in.
You fixed my part at 1:43ish. When you did the harmony, it was a good idea, but the notes you chose to harmonize with went away from the overall key of the song.
I agree, I still like the intro more, but this is good too.
Keep it up man!
Okay, when the electric guitar came in, I thought, "dang, he ruined it!" But then, as I thought about it, who would want a piece to be exactly the same as its predecessor?
I still like twilight interlude more, but this is great in its own way.
Great drums at the beginning!
sounds familure.. but not so familure heh.
some of this i was like WHOA I know this..oh wait.. hehe i don't. lol Great drum track. Great guitar work. the guitar that comes in at 55 seconds does need a little work it has a bit of a annoying screatching sound that takes some of the beauty out of the song. I know whaty ou were going for though and keep that idea in mind! Just change the sound a bit. Over all great work!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.