Sounds like you were doing a lot of downstrokes during the beginning.
It sounded really choppy, and I was expecting something much smoother.
The electric solo was very nice, that was a sweet ad in.
You fixed my part at 1:43ish. When you did the harmony, it was a good idea, but the notes you chose to harmonize with went away from the overall key of the song.
I agree, I still like the intro more, but this is good too.
Keep it up man!