With the person below me. Great music! The only thing you should do to make it better, is speed up the tempo, and cut the string part in the background. Other than that AWESOME!
The melody is composed flawlessly and the drums are quite solid. I have one critique and that is the rythm synth. Particularly at the beginning when it's only it and the melody, it seems out of place. I'm not sure why, possibly the cut, but just a suggestion. It's a very tiny observation and overall a very excellent creation. Great job!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.