...........Not bad for your first
This is not bad....not good.
You don't really see the meaning in this song like EverythingDark said.
But this I am impressed that this is your first.
Its Good I Guess But I Dont Really See A Point In It, after all it is your first submission. 3/5 ---Everything Dark---
Thx, I'll try to do the best next time!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.