I couldn't really understand what the intro meant or what it was supposed to mean, but overall it was just fine. I'd have to say I think this should be made into a flash movie simply because it's been such a long time since you've submitted one that it'd be fine if you came across anything.
you should make this into a movie. i dont think the begining was lame at all, especially since it was supposed to be for a movie. good job
the intro is lame-ass, but the rest is awsome
the beginning is a bit lame. the whole "true metal" speech, was ridiculous!
but after that, the music ruled!