I actually kind of liked the intro. I really like the sound of this. It captures both "liquid" and "filth." Great track.
Liquid Filth! Yummm...
To be honest the intro was kinda boring.
But the rest was overal good.
The voice was kinda funny altough you could have edited it abit, like in reverb or repeating, slicing and stuttering like that. might add that extra tough in it ;)
about the Beat:
The kick lacked some bass and structure, i found it too weak for DNB.
the snare is good enough lots of attack and kinda harsh.
Hihat is OK. nothing really special but it is really repetive! If you hear some DNB songs the hihats fill up the beat tremendously! you should trying to make something simlair that way. ( sorry if it's offensive )
oke, the bass and other synths are intresting. but lack some dynamic. maybe add more bass. i like the sounds and its quit detailed! But it just sounds too light for dnb.
maybe add some more beat changes here and there. beat stops, rolls, ect. DNB really pushes the breakbeat's...
bass could get some more bass..
try improving hihats.
maybe try editing the vocal
im not saying its bad but im just pointing out some negative points to help you ;)
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dont worry thats not offensive at all, what uve given me alot of decent constructive criticism, which i will try to take into account on my next pieces, newgrounds needs more people like you!