Its a good start.
Its an ok melody, but it anoys me after a while. And im not quite sure what you did so i cant really rate accordingly. But from what I hear, the EQ needs to be better. The Tite Hat is too loud, and the Short Hat needs to come out. Kick isnt loud enough. But this all comes with practice.
Hey, u know what? This is just fine the way it is. The dude B-low me thinks that it's good, and don't critisize other's work.
heh heh heh
It's like a hidden order, like
Kill the president, or something
Yeah, it sorta does. Defenetly a ninja/asassin or a sniper on a mission to kill some inportant guy.