3.08 / 5.00 (+ 0.38)
I think i know what your missing.. Its depth.. There is a good rythem but i think you need to counter one melody with another.. giving it a little bit more depth and adding some more substance (spelling?) to the song. Over all its a great work and deffenatly don't give up on it!
Sounds good, I'll put some more work into it, and re-release it in the next while. All the help I get helps me make better tunes, and I thank you for that. Peace out!
You have a very good strong beat and great lead synths and effects. But there just a little something missing. This song needs a nice deep atmospheric synth in the background, you know, to help to keep things flowing and moving the tempo along. Other than that one little thing, this is very good, you hard work paid off. I especially enjoyed the synth you used at 2:17, it's a cool sound.
Keep up to great work.
Thanks Torkelson! I'll have to keep what you said in mind for future songs. Im glad you liked the song,and I appreciate the time you took to listen. Peace!