Definately more skillful then your last captain feel, I like the use of filters, mastering and that "airy" sinth from the beginning.
The first melody was also kind of cool, almost 'curious' i would say.
My only comment would would be to have some sort of neat highhat action coming in and out on the 'and's" of each measure, while at the same time getting louder and quieter overall..like a double mastering I guess.
Other then that, sweet song. I like the synths in it most.
Well, that gives me some things to think about! Have you check out the 3rd and LAST installment of Hagren yet? It may surprise the dickens out of you!