summary: this is ok, i mean i don't see how harmful this song can be to the community. it acually souds like a song for a glitch. this isn't really bad.
your score: u get an 8/10 and 4/5 good job.
improvements: you should really add more music to he song and there is too much stops in the song and repeats. take out some stops and replace those with repeats but don't do exactly like repeat immediatly. put some music that would show that you are going into a repeat.
If you're so bored so why should the community suffer?
because this is an easy way to link............... . . . .......... ...............FUck
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