I've listenned both, yes, there's an improvement here. I am not a big fan of the monster sounds but everything else is better and more balanced overall.

dont really see the "metal over-tones"

BUT, it is definately one helluva industrial track

smooth and somewhat ambient, but dark and haunting alongside

kudos!

Great

Bass line is very good, drums well chosen, pretty cool synths. Nice stuff.

well what can i say?

bloody hell this is good shit.

hella sick

nice industrial sound but with metal overtones