Here i am again!
erm... it was a good melody as ever.
but it alone don't stands good.
if you want i can make you some playback!
mail me, PM me or even tell in a response to this.
i'll be very gratefull to help.
keep practicing. this was not your best. keep on practice, someday you can be a great musician.
ah, i play guitar too!
Yeah, you can try on doing playback to it, it would be really great. THX for review!
Not my favorite.
But still good. Keep up the good work. I'll look forward to your future songs.