I like it!
They dont mean the volume of the track, they mean the mastering. Youve hit redzone alot on this with the drums, making some speakers crackle and sound distortion will occur on alot of sound systems. Instead of having it so loud, bring it all down and try and master it.
Anyway, onto the track I like it. I like the drums, but it would have portrayed so much more dominant if it were the brass that came through, you have a nice theme going on there too, it's somewhat lost unfortuanately due to the drums. I think you should remaster and upload this again, bringing down the volume of the drums so we can hear the amount of work you obviously have put into this.