Pretty amusing, if a bit disorganized.
Amusing, if a little strange. Has an unusual spiritual/urban vibe to it. Some parts are fairly quiet, there are some synchronization issues, and there are some wind pops from the mic. To reduce of the mic pops, put a piece of tissue over the mic, or put the mic to the corner of your mouth. Or both, really.
I'd suggest for next time you try to place a main beat that transitions a few times to different pitches (don't go overboard, though), then listen to it and add some other sound effects. Might come off sounding really nice!