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Author Comments

Experimenting, hopefully getting better at this!
Please comment and Critique.
I want to get better, let me know how.

Reviews


Not bad

I understand your new to this but this isn't too bad. You got the melodies pretty good. The drums were allright but could've used some work. Try using a normal pattern like this:

Kick: [x][][][x][][][x][][][][x][][][x][][]
Snare: [][][][][x][][][][][][x][][][][][]
Hi Hat: [x][x][x][x][x][x][x][x][x][x][x][x][
x][x][x][x]

(The [] are a note on the redrum and the [x] are where you should put the note)

Just keep practicing diffrent patterns until you find some that sound more hip hopish and that you like.

5/5 - 4.38 / 5.00 (+ 0.045)


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OBIEakaAO responds:

thanks bro, i wll try that, do you use the default instruments or do you have refills? let me know! thanks for the review!


Nice

Well, It was pretty good though I felt that there was not enough interesting changes it just sorta stayed with the same thing with little blips here and there through the whole thing. All in all good work, keep it up!


OBIEakaAO responds:

hey thanks! It was made for a rapper/singer, a constant rythm helps keep a good flow! Thanks for the review!

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Credits & Info

OBIEakaAO
Author

Listens
574
Downloads
69
Votes
36
Score
4.08 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jun 6, 2008
1:34 AM EDT
Genre
Hip Hop - Modern
File Info
Song
5.8 MB
4 min 13 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.