Haha, pretty good my friend! I like 00:33 it goes really nice, love the guitar ; )
But Im afraid it distortes to much, are u using FL Studio, cause I might be able to help...just in case you do, try taking the master volume down like 10 bars and adding a soft clipper on the master channel, that would definetly help it lots!
You got a great tune bro, just fix the volume ^^
Oh! Btw PM when u do so, I want to hear it again ; )