Wow nice

This is really "NICE" I really love the "LYRICS" on this one, you have a good "VOICE" and it all works with rythem from start to finish and you push the limits on this one, you have some real "TALENT" for this kind of stuff, my suggestion for this is just make more great stuff, anyways nice work.

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my suggestion for this is just make more great stuff

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Funky, fierce, catchy; entertaining work! Nice one.

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Reminds me a lot of Eric B. and Rakim.

The beat sounds kind of like an old hip hop beat and you rap a lot like early Rakim here which is really cool. The lyrics aren't super amazing and the quality isn't very good either. Especially that echo voice in the beginning. But I really like the overall theme of the song.

love the beat man

you got a tight ass beat and nice ass rymne

verry cool and original

Its original and a nice rythm