nice

the song gots a nice beat good song.

more layers

you might want to try more layers of the song and make the melody more complicated instead of the same note being repeated. There is a format for dance and trance songs(well it sounds good to me). A gradual begining leading up to the main melody or the main melody begining leading up to a part where it gets softer, The break of the song. After the break speed the song up again to make it more interesting and add some new things that were not in the first part. Finish the song off with a gradual slow down, a big ending or just a quick silence thing.

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