this seems to be a promising song.
i also agree with Xenox, about variation.
it might be cool to add some vocals.
but what do i know? i'm still in high school =(
i'm also still in high school =P
and vocals are kinda hard to come by...the only option i really have is to take the acapella from an already existing song, or hire an amazing singer which isn't possible, or sing the words myself which wouldn't go over very well
Attention: a site of translation is used for this message, I am French. Very good preview, I wait for the full song with impatience! All your songs are great! Good job!
Tips for final version
1: Add more variation not only to the melody but also to the instruments you use and for the melody it basically runs on the same note pattern so mabye change it around instead of just making it glitch
2: Work on the drums a lot I mean in this song the are good But like "Krazy" said before me there are parts i just wish there where more like at :23
3: At the break at :43 maybe add a cool drum line thing or some sort of break drum loop just to keep things moving it kinda feels blank
Well in the overall this is very good and the melody is very addictive and I live the bells very much they add a lot to this one more thing when changeling from bells to the synth maybe have a drum roll with a crash or something
well anyways good work can't wait to here the finale version (actually can you pm me so I can wright a long review on how I think you did lol)
So yeah again good work
Have A great Day !
thanks a lot for your feedback! i'll take everything you said into consideration and i'll try to remember to pm you when it's done
What an uplifting track. It takes me back to my past, when everything was simple.. and the joys of life came from the simplest of things. When your imagination deemed how your day would unfold, not the intricacies of adult life. Fantastic piece. 5/5, 10/10, and hoping to download the full version within the near future.
thanks! full version should be done within 2 weeks from now at the absolute latest, at least a week since i'll be out of town.
I liked it. Catchy and well made.
thanks for reviewing =)