A little Harsh on the ears

The strings are really strong, and allmost have a serrated quality to them, makeing it really harsh on the ears to lision too. And some parts of the song are really abrupt, and repeateded allmost to the point of being unbearable. I definitley dont want to listion to it a second time over.

Go ahead and lenthen out your song, soften up the melody (a lot), and work on harmony and flow.