Seems completely random.
The song simply has no coherence, no direction, no feeling. I get the feeling you played random keys on a midi keyboard. It would do you some good to take theory or something. At the very least, listen to things before you submit them. Do you honestly think this sounds good?
If you keep trying, you could probably get somewhere, but this looks like a complete blob of nonsensical randomness to me.
Your MOM has no coherence. Yea...I showed you..
Also big words from a man whose songs all sound the same.
Jammin' sounds like quest 64.
But the pan stuff with that pluck is bother the living fuck out of me and makes my right ear bleed frogs! :[
O'rly? Maybe Ill remove that then.
Disturbing and somniferous at the same time. Nice.
Worst thing i've ever heard.
Complete lack of talent here. This track is almost so bad I don't even think I can give any advice. You can't even explain yourself in the Author Comments. Maybe it would be best if you just stopped trying to make music all together.
Go back to crying in your emo blog tekcos, nobody likes you.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.