Good Attempt...but lacking
Its easy to see that you made a honest attempt, but a substain pedal would carrry you alot better in many areas of the song. You got some beat, and rythom now you just need to work on your "Flow". This song is very "chopped up".
Totally agree with you. The organ in the beginning, or any transitions with the stings are pretty choppy, thanks for the review man. Take it easy. :D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.