Really good.

But you need bass. It make these songs so much better.

great

ps is this of anouther song

Almost the best ever

This is quite nice work it balances on the line of hardcore and dance but(t) has a catchy beat that almost made me jump around in the living room like a Fool!

awesome!!!!!!

yo that was tight keep making good submissions like that

Cool dude! -TJH

This song has promise for flash! It gas some groovy beats dude.

One thing I think would be cool: More Center structure...

In other words, the quarter bass and synth saw give great sound to the song, but it needs a storyline. To me, music, in all of its glory, has a story to tell. This song seems like a Dr. Suess story. Has great detail, but kind of lacks conflict provoking a climax.

Try giving some extra melody lines, or, if you think you have enough, give those melody lines some structure. for example, synth strings, or possibly a synth bass that gives the song some character. Really explore! I can see this song someday appearing on a flash movie already! -TJH