good so far
Your melodies, tunes beats etc. are all pretty awesome, my suggestion is that you look for some better synths, ear friendly synths lol, that beginning hurt my ears. If you're making a dance song, you're gonna wanna bring the beat out more, amplify it, raise the attack or something like that.
I think you should also bring out your melody, try echoing it or at least getting a synth with more 'oompf'
I like what you have so far though.
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