Not so good
It sounded like the synths were out of beat with the beat.
I like it, it is just very poorly sequenced. if you just fix it up a bit, this would be very neat, you also need a stronger kick drum and way better synths, but i like the style of this song, your on the right track!
You need better synths, rather than just detuned squares or whatever you used, also they went off time in a few places I think.. but the slides were pretty catchy though.
Also your beat is pretty weak, you need better quality, stronger kicks and offbeat bass. And you need to mix and master it properly.
Thanks for the advice.
I will spend a lot more time with more tracks coming soon!!