Something a bit more emotional this time, also not quite done, give it a listen.
It's not quite finished.
Feedback welcome.
Hmmmm...
I don't know why your getting such a bad rating because it's a good song... it just needs more, ya know? Some more instruments maybe... The ending is kind of abrupt and the bass drum isn't featured enough, as in it only plays for the last 30 or so seconds of the song. It's a good start, just add more to it. 4/5 8/10
by the way, if you get the chance, check out some of my stuff :D
alextheDJ
Thanks for the response Alex! After mentioning it, I think might add some orchestral type arrangements to the beginning a little of the way through... as far as the ratings, newgrounds always zero bombs me, from my experience.
I'll be sure to check it out.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
DoctorAttitude 
