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The intro completey blew me away. Then it shifted into a slower mode. A nice laid back feeling to this song. Then a :50 the song tok a sharp turn, but it came back nicely. Transitions were adequately smooth. Great work

Suggestions: that sharp turn at :50 was kinda out of place. I think there could have been a better transistion.

svere responds:

Mission accomplished. The "turn" might have been too extreme. Thanks for the review!


Hmmm, its a cool song, kinda started very quickly. And suddenly. I think you should of eased it in better, as the drums come in wildly, then settle into a slowish tune.
Its ok, feels a bit like you tryed to put too much into such a short piece though.

Good guitar and instruments though.


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svere responds:

It starts right in your face! Quality over Quantity. Thanks for the review!


The first thing that I thought was why were the drums so fast for the start of the song? It's not like the rest of the song required such pacy drum beats.

I think that you need to stick to a few areas of this and develop the tune with the guitar more, as it feels like you've tried too many styles for the relatively short length of the tune.

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svere responds:

The intro drums are explosive. The different guitar parts are individual and doesn't have anything to do with each other. Vai is the master. Thanks for your review!

Pretty Nice

The first thing I would like to point out about this though is that the opening just seems to be a pause and then it suddenly bursts into the song, maybe work on that part. But after that everything seems to come together very well, even if you have some instuments that seem to sound a little too high pitched for my liking, lol.

You have everything coming together very well here, but it does seem to build into something a little too late, being right at the end. It does end well which is good, you just need to do that for the start and this will be perfect then, lol. Some odd sounds in this too, but all the same, it's pretty neat overall, good job.



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svere responds:

A great review, thank you! I love odd sounds :)


This would work very good as a song for racing games like F-Zero or Wipeout (you know, those "future racing games" ;) ).

Sometimes the drums seem to be a bit off beat (mainly in the beginning. Later on they are fine).
Also, the guitars need to be a lot louder. They are overpowered by the drums, even though the drums aren't that loud, too.

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svere responds:

Okay, I hear you. I'll keep that in mind when mixing upcoming songs. Thank you, Haggard!

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4.11 / 5.00

May 29, 2008
10:07 AM EDT
General Rock
File Info
2.4 MB
1 min 46 sec

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