You're already improving. This one is far better than Starburst Paradise. You still need some work though. I actually like the beat for the snare and kick, that was a nifty beat... Ooh, the transition at 1:20 was EXTREMELY rough... I personally think it would've been a bit better without the fadeout and the sudden spazzmode of fruit kicks. This one has a nice orchestral bit to it... I'm convinced that you can compose, this one has some great composition (save the bad transition) for a beginning song. Just keep it up!
Be careful when you use simsynth. It's actually very hard to use a simsynth sound effect and make it sound good.
Kay, thanks for the suggestions.
This is Pretty decent for a first try :P
I like the synths and leads all the way through, but your samples were a little basic, maybe if you try getting some new VSTi's from www.kvraudio.com?
The fade out was a good idea, but I think it happened to fast and that the kick should have been faded in. other than that, Its pretty good :P
Sounds like classical.
/ for effort
Thank you for the honest opinion... Glad to know there's places to get new instruments... As I was a bit stuck at some points trying to get some good ones... Usually I just edit the 3xOsc preset and try and get a synth sound similar to what I need.
I enjoyed the song but i didnt really like the fade bit in the center, about 1:16-1:23
Yeah... I like how it turned out, but looking back on it, I should have made 2 automation clips, because what's there is just a fade-in, and then for when the synth/drums come back in, I had them go back up really quickly... Turns out it's really obvious =/
Love it great job!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.