You're already improving. This one is far better than Starburst Paradise. You still need some work though. I actually like the beat for the snare and kick, that was a nifty beat... Ooh, the transition at 1:20 was EXTREMELY rough... I personally think it would've been a bit better without the fadeout and the sudden spazzmode of fruit kicks. This one has a nice orchestral bit to it... I'm convinced that you can compose, this one has some great composition (save the bad transition) for a beginning song. Just keep it up!
Be careful when you use simsynth. It's actually very hard to use a simsynth sound effect and make it sound good.