not the best
not the best I've ever heard, but its definatly not the worst, next time, try to make it more interesting, it made cool sounds like the post below states, but no matter how much cool sounds it has, it won't keep it interesting, add more tempo changes and dynamic changes and I'll vote better next time, 3/5 from me
thx for te good advise. i really needed it, cuz if no one says what i do wrong i cant make it better ...
Absolutley not the best i've heard, but nice made and sounds good:) 4/5 :D