i agree

great beginning but until the end it needed a little something, i personally think that you just put in more piano anyway great song 5/5

Catchy, but starts to die at the end.

First things first, you should not be in the 2 our of 5's for your score. There's some asshole right now going around and giving everyone zero's, I've seen a sharp decrease in scores. Don't feel bad you've got a sweet little diddy here. A 4/5 from me.

So, here's the thing. Love, love the crazy piano in the beginning, I'm gonna have to disagree with SRT-M1tch. It was sweet, I think the way you did it was just too kool. But, it started to become cliché techno at the end and I didn't like that. But your melody was really good. Try to find somethine original to bring up the mood at the end cause the mood at the beginning...wow. Good work man, keep it up.

Well.

First couple of things:

Pros:
--Melody - wow...it was great.
--Very Dance-ish - Fits into the category well.
--Percussion/Bass - Awesome, appropriate for the song.

Cons:
--Piano parts(in the beginning) had way to much static. - Some EQing should clear that up.
--Piano parts - Random breakdowns that happen with no warning.
--Things in general had too much static.

OVERALL! - 10/10, 5/5. Awesome Job! Hope this helps!

-SRT-M1tch