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Author Comments

I wrote it for someone's birthday a long time ago. I'd like criticism please. Or just feedback in general. Or whatever.

Reviews


O-k, you're getting there...

Alright man so you've got a composing talent. Now you've gotta work out how you're gonna use that talent. I feel like I've heard songs that sound like this before, and that's because your just using the very basics of your motif. Trying taking your motif, which is very kool by the way, and transpose it, or play it with a slightly altered rhythm, that should add some zest. Also, try working out a new, varied bass line and some entirely different, probably short, phrases to throw in between your motif driven sections.

Overall you seem to possess a talent for creation of great themes. Work on manipulating them and your next piece will shine. Good luck, my friend.


surtur responds:

Thank you for the helpful post.

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Credits & Info

surtur
Author

Listens
465
Downloads
69
Votes
5
Score
2.49 / 5.00

Uploaded
May 26, 2008
9:08 PM EDT
Genre
Miscellaneous
File Info
Song
627 KB
41 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.