Yeah nice song man, keep up your work
I liek it very smooth. Doesnt make me think to much jsut want to fall back arfn relax.
thats one imagination anit-paragon..........anyway nice calm soothing beat you got here.
The rain at both ends of the song a great addition, and some of your transitions are well done. Some of the other transitions are a bit sharp, appearing quite suddenly, but it doesn't take away from the song. As you said, the song seems a bit haphazard in means of direction, but my take on it is, someone having lost a love one. they stands at the graveyard in lament, and as they look outside of the graveyard, they see life continues. At 0:47, they see cars go buy, large businesses in the distance seem unaffected. Cars continue by on a busy road.
At 1:23, some children play in the graveyard nearby, completely unaware of the dead below. 1:39, the cars can be heard again. (2:45)But through all this, the person decides to say at the grave for a moment longer. their loved one deserves at least that.
No criticisms. I like the song how it is. Thanks for making this.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.