get yourself a drum machine or some samples or something. This stuff sould just be so much better. you have nice guitar riffs, so keep it up.
problem is.... I'm broke. The only time I really get to use a computer is when I'm at my aunt's house, so it's difficult to use that in my recording, but thanks for the review.
Not bad, assuming this as a "stand-alone" clip.
It' not bad as a stand alone clip. However, the effect you used seems kind of thick over the guitars natural sound. Don't get me wrong, I like flangers and chorus effects, but it seems like this clip would sound even better with a more natural sound. Other than that, pretty well preformed.
eh... I don't think it's too much, but I guess that's just a matter of taste. This was just something I came up with on the spot when I was bored anyways...