well, it's good
give it a more, a little more tempo, and some "Bass-like" instruments, not all these quiete ones.
Well... personally I would LOVE to have something louder to put with it, but the music program I use isn't actually made to pump out audio, and the feature that does is just to check the music. Finale 07 just isn't for loud instruments. :P terribly sorry. Thanks for the thoughts though.