Surprisingly easy to like
Easy to like despite the simplicity. It just kinda works. Yes, the noise prevented me giving you a 10 (more work for animators). Cool.
Fan of the blues, guitarists, and guitars. However, this sounded like a first draft of a story tha might turn out good. Get rid of the hum, that's number one. Then, use a lil overdrive/distortion on the rythym guitar. Next, turn the treble and tone knobs DOWN on the lead guitar and amp, if this is a mic-ed recording. Then do some panning to polish it up. Mix one guitar part at a time, and offset them.
Hope this helps, good luck.
Some constructive critizism...
Great blues song, all the way down to the soul, chord progressions follow what I've always come to think of in typical blues songs. by the way, was this a live recording (as it says it was from a jam recital)? Anywho, the two defining things that I was missing while listening to this were a drumbeat (which I believe would be benificial) and some differentiating chords on the bassline, it just repeated, repeated, and repeated again (but that's the way of blues, right? :P)
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