all you need is some more jazz experience
ill say it again
learn jazz u learn how to do anything
Very well done
This is not my area of expertise, partially because this is your learning experience and i would say it fits comfortably into the experimental genre. You have nice funky sounds, and you have some nice... well, more electronic sound, but I'm not sure if they go together the best which is why you get the 9 instead of 10. They are balanced, but not quite complimenting in a way that creates a nice laid back funky song. That saw was just out and out way too abrasive...
My compliments on the percussion though.. it was very well done for the most part! Good job.
I just feel it needs a little bit more, because it sounds a tad empty.
I really like the melody though,
which was very well done.
Despite slight repetitiveness; its great :D
I like it, keep up the good work.
alright! i can work with that, thanks a bunch!
I really like this, especially the horn.
Loved what you did with this.
Keep learning man, cause you're good!
woot, thank you man!