It does have a poor start, but I do really like the last half of the song. Also I didn't really like the static background sound. I could of lived without that. Something needs to be there, but not white noise.
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I was trying to get like a sad moment going than everything just gets better from then on well i could do better ill work on this some more
If you ask me the song had a lot of trouble just sounding like it was a single song. There were no real constant tracks. No simple synth tracks or drum beats played in the background for at least most of the song. This caused it to seam broken up and just a bunch of seperate tracks.
It all just seamed way to experimental. Instead of just putting up a bunch of tracks you did to test out the program maybe you should find one and work on that alone. That's what it seamed like you started to do at 0:45, but that still leaves an entire half of a song wasted.
So like I said, try and make the song more connected because right now there is a real problem with that. If you have a problem doing that with the song then maybe you should just use 0:45 and up because only at that point did it start sounding like a real song.
Thanks ill work on this piece i agree the ending was short i was aiming for something a little different in this song. Hopefully i can make up and better start for it! Thanks you again Keep listining