Man your great
You should really clean up the music maybe you wanted that way, but you could make some great cash off some of your songs.
i love your guy's comedy songs there epic
i realy like your voice and the music being all over the place i think is realy cool makes it more up beat
do one of two things
You can either get the music together (on time, and better quality) and make millions. or sell this song to an artist...and make millions.
This would have been a 10 if it weren't for the music being all over the place and the sound quality of the music being so terrible. otherwise this is absolutely amazing.
HA I like ALOT
Love your voice man ....especially loved the flow of the lyrics. one nitpick...spend a little more time on the guitar mixing and effects...it could have been better done with the little bit of percusion. and watch your voice at 2.15 you could have made that waver note more crisp.
otherwise great jobkeep up the good work
and if you have time please check out my music
i appreciate other musicians opinions
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