I could see it on...

A nintendo ds or gameboy of some sort.

It's nice but...

I think some of it would sound better if you used piano instead of some of the synths you use.

They kind of clash. (Or did you use piano and I not notice it? =/)

Still, it's a good start.

And I loved how you described the game you made it forl..."One of those games where you can walk and run, but can't jump..."

Rofl...Nice