I thought you got Zero voted, so doing my duty i voted 5 to couteract it. I was wrong, i was actually first vote. So i killed you with kindness. :)
Anyways its an ok peice. I think right before the base comes in it starts to get really repative. i suggest you try this with diffrent instruments that don't "dang dang dang" so much. after a while you can't hear the notes any more. its just constant ringing.
The samples need work. they seem really fake. The base line is to low, like WAAAY to low. It doesn't harmonize well when your baseline and melody are like 6 octaves apart.
it has potential, i would come back to this and being really critical with it.
5 of 5. (i would have voted 3)
5 of 10 on review.