Hey man, you got owned by the zero-bombers, the song isn't terrible but they always dive in and rape newcomers(almost literally). You get my five because I know you have the passion to succeed with this stuff.
The only thing we are missing in this is a good lead and with that it would be awesome. 7/10 because of that, otherwise it's kewwwwwwl.
Peace - //:-sr4clD-:\\