It's pretty nice, though I like the background noises the best...Is this your first song or was it just your first submission?
This was my first submission here on Newgrounds. I must say it's rather simplistic. I mean, it's got some nice ideas; but it's also too simple and there's so much more I could do with the song, knowing what I know now. It's pretty good but a bit too repetitive.
Thanks for the review!
(I can't believe that you came all the way back to my first submission - hah).
this is really asowme lol, i have downloaded it i only do that for my favorite songs, so far i have 5
Thanks for the review, I'm glad that you enjoyed the song. I hope you keep listening to it, if I update it, I will let you know. Thanks again!
Reminds me absurdly of a couple of tracks on timesplitters 2.
The vocals are a novel idea, but for a while the song seems to fade while the vocals take over; they are very repetitive so this can be annoying. If anything, the vocals should support.
I like how it builds, really one of the slower moving techno songs on the site, but this works due to good usage of tones.
Change a very few things and this could be very very good.
As it is, it's still probably better than what I could do!
Thanks for the input Pants, everything's still a work in progress so I think I'll go back and adjust a few things. I'll look at varying the vocals a bit because they are indeed pretty repetitive. Really appreciate the comments, maybe I'll tweak and re-upload.
This is wack yo!
It honestly sounds kinda weird but i do like how everything is very "on beat" and its sorta addictive... dunno y... lol sooooo ..... 10/10 lol
Haha, thanks for the review, glad you liked it.
I love it. And I truly do. If I didn't I wouldn't have rated this a five and put it above mine. So congrats! xP
Thanks for the review Tack, I'm glad you enjoyed this one, they'll be more to come soon when I get the time to tweak things on the songs I have to upload.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.