The song is okay...
You had a great base melody but you did nothing with it. There were so many spot where you could have evolved the song but you kept it the some. This causes it to be very repetitive. Next time, try elaborating on the melody and not the background music.
now that's a song I have been looking for a long time.
its pretty good buts its a bit repetitive i guess lol bt yeh make it longwer
i gave u a 5 cuse its good an i love it but make one longer +)