As you already know...
It's very choppy.
And the drums...=/ lol.
But I can't talk. Apparently this must be a pretty difficult thing to use.
The pads were good and so was the solo guitar, not bad.
One thing I would recommend is switch up the chords you play.
Have a break down. Something along those lines.
Not bad though. You're not as bad as you think lol.
Well thanks, when I look back now once I posted it, the drums I know lol. I have it all in my mind, but i can't get it down in garageband... Please I need help on how to use the drums and stuff. PM me. I love my last solo by the way, I don't know why.
For real, reminds me when I was a noob. I'm still not that great but you can tell making music is new to you. My suggestion is not to stop, the very first rythym you introduce to us is very well put together. You need more work on drums, definatly, but don't stop, it all comes with time.
You can check out some of my stuff if you want - my early stuff will proly hurt you ears, but you can see the improvement I've had.
I don't take that to offense at all because I'm a huge noob at making music. I just wish I knew how to use those damn drums, I have the full idea in my head but I can never get what I want. PM me if you have any suggestions.