Not my forte but...
I can't be a jerk about stuff I rate.
Main thing is the beginning of the song. The openning pause is drawn out too much and slightly turned me off to listenning to it all through. The rest is pretty good for doing an 8-bit version. Keep on trying man, it only fails if you give up.
i am sorry but Failure i may not this is the complete orignal song i turned into 8-bit it is under "video games" I do not give up has there is no further editing needed for this peice its is 100% done.
8-bit is 8-bit that pause is in the orignal song so it shall be outh in the 8-bit
plus MIDI is from the orignal Song so Complaints arent Towards me but to the midi creator who made the midi in turning to me to turn it which was a copy of the actually song in to classic 8-bit goodness.