There isn't to much going on here, but I think the trance bass isn't that good of a fit for the amen break. The gate was a nice idea to try and generate some rhythm. Flanged out drums at the start where a nice addition as well. Explore and experiment with wav creation, harmonics, FX, and you can definitely do some damage in the biz. You definitely have a feel for the genre it just needs to be expanded.
If you read the date, this is from early 08. This is ooooooold. :D
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