Ya the bass is too high (distorts) in some of the song areas, for the most part it's better than my songs :). Turn down the bass a little and resubmit you'll get a 9 or ten from me. I voted five though, but I guess you have one zero because it went to 2.50.
but it would sound betta with a few touch ups. the bass is mad too high up and distorted, turn off tha bass boost or juss turn it down.
by tha way, when yu doin bass n ne otha instrument, some notes need to be turned down and up individually for tha best sound.
yo if yu got tha time check by my beats,
good work, yu keep practicin n yu gon make it real good