Quite a nice song, actually. Spiffing!
I especially like the start, up to about 48 seconds. I don't usually like that low slimy-kinda sound. It'd probably be better if you could make a longer version of the song, or make it into a loop.
And I dunno yet what it reminds me of, but it does remind me of something.
Keep up this kinda song, too, as this casts a different shadow to teh rest of your pieces.
U've heard my previous ones ? I'm newbie :( Learning with Fruiti loops and using ejay dance 4 (ejay is old) gonna have trance ejay 8 :)